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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2022, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2022, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart represents how many households in the US with respect to their yearly
income
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 in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, there are 5 categories of
income
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 approximately ranging
per
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apply
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USD
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 25,000 from less than
USD
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 25,000 to more than
USD
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 100,000 with some categories
witnessed
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 a significant fluctuation
while
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 some were relatively stagnant.
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Number
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A number
The number
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 of families with
income
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 less than
USD
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 25,000 and those with
income
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 more than
USD
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 100,000 fluctuated the most over
years
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the years
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 with around
5
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a 5
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million difference
overall
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.
This
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 trend
also
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implies
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applies
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 to those who gain
USD
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 25,000 to
USD
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 49,999 each year,
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however
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however,
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this
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 group of families only accounts for around 3 million difference.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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 of families who obtain
USD
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 50,000 to
USD
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 74,999 and
USD
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 75,000 to
USD
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 99,999 each year kept almost the same
number
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 in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Group of households which receive
USD
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 75,000 to
USD
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 99,999 were the least
number
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 compared to other groups,
which
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with
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 approximately half
to
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of
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 those who receive more than
USD
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 100,000 per year.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, usd, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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