The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2022, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents how many households in the US with respect to their yearly
income
in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Overall
, there are 5 categories of income
approximately ranging per
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USD
25,000 from less than USD
25,000 to more than USD
100,000 with some categories witnessed
a significant fluctuation Wrong verb form
witnessing
while
some were relatively stagnant.
Number
of families with Change the article
A number
The number
income
less than USD
25,000 and those with income
more than USD
100,000 fluctuated the most over years
with aroundCorrect article usage
the years
5
million difference Correct article usage
a 5
overall
. This
trend also
implies
to those who gain Verb problem
applies
USD
25,000 to USD
49,999 each year, however
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however,
this
group of families only accounts for around 3 million difference.
On the other hand
, the number
of families who obtain USD
50,000 to USD
74,999 and USD
75,000 to USD
99,999 each year kept almost the same number
in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Group of households which receive USD
75,000 to USD
99,999 were the least number
compared to other groups, which
approximately half Correct your spelling
with
to
those who receive more than Change preposition
of
USD
100,000 per year.Submitted by nadillamntr on
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