The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the yearly expenditure of three bakeries in London over a
period
of 10 years
from 2000 to 2010
Overall
, It’s clear to see that the annual earnings of Robbia’s Bakery and Barnie’s Buns showed an upward trend. While
Lovely Loaves
experience a downward trend in the
yearly earnings throughout the Correct article usage
apply
period
.
To begin
with, the yearly income
for Robbia’s Bakery was around 58.000 Pounds
in 2000, and it remained stable for the next four years
, In 2005 it increased around
60.000 Change preposition
to around
Pounds
. Subsequently
, It still increased for the next two years
around
100.000 Change preposition
by around
Pounds
, and it occupied around 102.000 Pounds
in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
period
, As for Lovely loaves
, the yearly Capitalize word
Loaves
income
in 2000 was 20.000 Pound
. Fix the agreement mistake
Pounds
However
, for the next two years
it increased Add a comma
years,
about
40.000 Change preposition
by about
Pounds
in 2003 and it remained stable for the next four years
, In 2007 it increased dramatically above 60.000 Pound
Fix the agreement mistake
Pounds
at the end
of the graph in 2010.
The annual income
for Lovely loaves
was the highest at the beginning around 80.000 Capitalize word
Loaves
Pounds
. In addition
, for the next five years
it fluctuated, and it plunged to 40.000 Add a comma
years,
Pounds
in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
period
, which means Lovely Loaves
had the lowest income
of all three bakeries.Submitted by zaidamrat5 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, years, loaves, income, pounds with synonyms.
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