The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010.
The graph gives information about the yearly
income
of three bakeries in London during the 10-year period. Units are measured by the pound.
overall
, it is evident that the earnings of money by the year in Lovely Loavens bakery
significantly declined, while
Berrse’s Buns bakery
vires a virsa increased dramatically. whereas
Robbie’s Bakery
significantly increased their income
.
First of all, Lovely Loavens bakery
commenced with a total income
of £80,000. After that, there was a considerable decline in 2005 to slightly above £60,000. The following year was a sharp decrease then
became steady from in the last
two years by £40,000 annually. Whereas
The annual earrings of Berrse’s Buns bakery
started with £20,000. Followed by a slight incline in 2002. Then
became stable with a total income
of around £40.000 in 2007.In the last
3 years upward with above £60,000 yearly.
The annual income
of the Robbies Bakery
begins under £60,000 it was steadily until 2005. Moreover
, there was a significant rise in their earning recorded by nearly to
£100,000 in 2008Change preposition
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