People who buy friendly vehicles like electric cars should receive a subsidy on tax. This will discourage people from buying polluting cars and thus lower emissions. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Nowadays carbon emissions are on the increase. Some believe that
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introduction conclusion present
Your introduction should clearly present your stance on the topic and outline the main points that your essay will cover. A conclusion is necessary to summarize your arguments and restate your position. Ensure both are included and clearly state your viewpoint.
logical structure
The essay lacks a logical structure. Ideas should be organized into clear, coherent paragraphs, each with a single main idea that is expanded upon with supporting details and examples. Use transition words to connect ideas and paragraphs smoothly.
supported main points
Support the main points with specific examples and details. The use of relevant examples helps to illustrate your points and make your argument more convincing. Make sure these examples directly relate to the topic.
complete response
To fully respond to the task, your essay needs to address all parts of the prompt. Make sure to explain why you agree or disagree, and thoroughly discuss the reasons behind your viewpoint. A complete response includes a developed argument with a clear position throughout the essay.
clear comprehensive ideas
Your ideas must be clear and easy to understand. Clarify your arguments and structure sentences and paragraphs in a way that allows the reader to follow your thought process without confusion. Expand on your ideas and avoid overly simple statements.
relevant specific examples
Incorporate specific, relevant examples to strengthen your arguments. Examples provide evidence and make your essay more persuasive. They should be directly linked to the point you are making and be detailed enough to add value to your argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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