In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that children can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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help

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alternative to

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and that

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at

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on the

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would be more helpful. In my opinion

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study

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at school

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important for

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in both social and educational terms. So in

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we will discuss many reasons which

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the non-acceptance and support of

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opinion.

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the

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are important to develop the individual and society.

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it is a vital institution for the transfer of education and teaching.

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focuses on studying physical education and the arts that are difficult to

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online and at

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study

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at

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resets and motivates

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and provides them with guidance

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teachers who teach

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regularity and focus on the future

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is not available when learning at

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.

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in most

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in the classroom,

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are divided into groups and

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enhances their social cooperation and gains them trust in others. The

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has always helped us in many different tasks, but becoming an alternative to studying in

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is not good and has many drawbacks:

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, and the most important of these is that many

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do not have full access to the

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due to

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the different material differences between

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.

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,It is true that the

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contains many information,

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it contains doubtful or false information, so it does not

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on it completely.

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, the

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does not enhance the social aspect of

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, unlike

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that teach social and emotional cooperation. In Conclusion the importance of studying in

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over the past and coming years has become a subject of discussion and replacement by studying online at

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, but in my opinion

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discussion will always fail because studying in

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is more beneficial to the individual and society and healthier.