The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart

shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people

think the costs of adult education should be shared.

Write a report for a university lecturer
The bar chart represents the causes of adult students to study,
whereas
the pie chart provides the data on how the course tuition fee should be allocated.
To begin
,
according to
the first chart
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most students opt for learning because of their genuine interest in a particular subject, at 40, followed by those who want to gain
qulification
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qualifications
qualification
, at 38%.
In contrast
, just 12% of individuals go to
the
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university for being able to change their
career
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in the future,
while
only 9% attend classes for socialising purposes.
Furthermore
, the same amount of learners participate in
studing
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studying
because they enjoy
this
process and to improve their skills in order to be promoted at their current workplace, at 20%. Even though it's been considered that 35% of
payment
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needs to be shared with employers, the proportion for individuals
surpass
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this
number, at 40%, leaving 25% for taxpayers.
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