The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount times spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The charts illustrate the fluctuation in one country between 1920 and 2019 by percentages of households with electrical appliances and the number of
hours
for doing housework .
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Overall
, the number of households with Linking Words
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vacum
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vacuum
cleaners
and refrigerators increased significantly from the start and stagnant from 2000 to 2019, Use synonyms
while
washing machines Linking Words
drop
slightly in 1960 before increasing again. The average Wrong verb form
dropped
times
spent on housework decreased significantly in Fix the agreement mistake
time
this
country between 1920 and 2019.
Linking Words
To begin
with, Linking Words
refrigators
and Correct your spelling
refrigerators
refrigerator
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vacum
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vacuum
cleaners
have Use synonyms
similarity
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similar
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trend
. Fix the agreement mistake
trends
Refrigators
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Refrigerators
growth
significantly in Replace the word
grow
ownship
that starting from 0% to 100% Correct your spelling
ownership
by
60 years only. After reaching the highest point, Change preposition
in
rerigators
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irrigators
refrigerators
constantly
stagnant until 2019. In the same Add a missing verb
were constantly
trend
, Use synonyms
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vacum
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vacuum
cleaners
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rise
significantly from 30% in 1920 to 90 in 1980. Wrong verb form
rose
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Vacum
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Vacuum
cleaners
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reach
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reached
the
peak at 100% in 2000 and constantly until 2019. Correct article usage
a
However
, washing machines have different Linking Words
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trend
that Fix the agreement mistake
trends
fluctuative
. The Correct your spelling
fluctuate
ownship
of washing machines Correct your spelling
ownership
township
increase
slowly from 40% to 70% in 1960 and Wrong verb form
increased
decrased slighly
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decreased slightly
at
60% in 1980. Change preposition
to
Although
Linking Words
,
washing Remove the comma
apply
macines
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machines
encourated
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encouraged
downward
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a downward
trend
in 1980, the Use synonyms
trend
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increase
slowly to 70% in 2019.
The amount of Wrong verb form
increased
times
a household needed to spend by people in Fix the agreement mistake
time
this
country Linking Words
fall
significantly from 50 Wrong verb form
fell
hours
to 20 Use synonyms
hours
in 1960. Use synonyms
Afterward
, the average of Change the spelling
Afterwards
hours
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decrease
slightly around 10 Change the verb form
decreases
hours
and constant until 2019.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, vacum, cleaners, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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