More and more people are shifting to a plant-based diet. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Many cultures have traditionally followed a
meat
-based diet
, but an increasing number of people
are now replacing animal products in their diet
with plant-based foods. This
essay will examine the key drivers of this
trend and argue that it is a largely positive development.
The most common reasons for becoming a vegan seem to be based on ethical or environmental concerns. In recent years, confronting information about practices involved in some large-scale meat
and dairy farming has emerged, such
as the inhumane conditions in which some animals are raised, transported and killed. As a consequence
, many people
feel they can no longer ethically justify eating meat
. We are also
now better informed about the massive contribution of livestock farming to deforestation and greenhouse gas emissions compared to that of growing plant crops, leading many people
who are concerned about climate change to avoid eating meat
.
This
trend towards plant-based eating is generally positive. A diet
of fruit, vegetables and whole grains has numerous health benefits, including preventing cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. If more people
adopt this
way of eating, the taxpayer burden of treating these health conditions, which are often associated with a heavily meat
-based diet
, may decrease. More importantly, as consumption of meat
and dairy falls, production levels will follow suit, helping to reduce carbon emissions and preserve carbon-storing forests. A major shift away from animal products would have negative consequences for that industry, however
. Mitigation strategies would need to be implemented to prevent unemployment and build resilience in farming communities.
To conclude
, a desire to be more compassionate towards other living creatures and less destructive of the environment seems to be the main impetus for the current rise in plant-based eating. While
a vegan diet
rich in whole foods is undoubtedly positive for the health of people
and the planet, a wholesale transition away from meat
will need to be carefully managed.Submitted by a.bbuttar on
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Task Response
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