The graph below shows how people buy music.

To give a line graph illustrates the proportion of how much three different music types were purchased. In general, it is noticeable that the portion of

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music purchasing at two types of

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declined except for streams, which underwent a considerable increase over the entire period. A closer look at the graph reveals that

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CD purchased accounted for approximately 60% in the initial. Despite

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nearly 25% in terms of the person of downloads mounted to about 35% in 2011

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increased slightly to 42% in 2014 but had dropped to roughly 30% by 2018. With regard to the

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of streams, were the least

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position in 2018 skyrocketed and remained at 42%. With these statistics

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streams were the most obtained music method beginning from 2017 till the end of the period