The line graph shows the number of population shows TV and Radio from october -november 1992.
The line graph below illustrates the population between
TV
and Radio
from October- November 1992. As you can see, a large number of folk preferred to listen to the Radio
in the morning.
According to
the line graph, Radio
started at 3 per cent
at 1:00 AM. In addition
, a peak of Radio
had been seen at 9:00 AM about 25 per cent
preferred to listen to the Radio
while
, A few of people
watched TV
in that time approximatley 6 per cent
. Moreover
, after at 9 AM the percentage of used the Radio
had decline. However
, TV
started at 6 per cent
at 1:00 AM, whereas
, at 12:00 AM the percentage of folk had decrease nearly 3 per cent
. Furthermore
, after that time the percantage had upwise to 16:00 PM in this
time about 40 per cent
of people
whatched TV
. Also
, at the end
of the day exactly 15 per cent
of people
watched TV
.
In conclusion, the people
who lived in UK in1992 with the start a day means at 1:00AM to 7:00AM had at least per cent
of folk listened the Radio
and watched TV
. But, in the morning the percentage of people
who used the Radio
had increase. Also
, in the afternoon to the night people
preferd watched TV
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