The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the
varities
in ownership of electrical devices and the amount of Correct your spelling
varieties
time
spent doing Correct your spelling
house chore
house chores
housechore
in families in one country over Correct your spelling
housing
a
period Correct article usage
the
1920
to 2019
Change preposition
from 1920
Overall
, the percentage of household
with machines quite Fix the agreement mistake
households
in creased
over the Correct your spelling
increased
time
presented. Moreover
, the hours that families spent on them was
slightly decreased day by day.
To commence with, the washing machines Unnecessary verb
apply
was
utilised devices that started at 40% and continued to grow to 70%, after 20 years Correct subject-verb agreement
were
then
had a dip before got back to the previous amount. In the same period
the vacuum cleaner Add a comma
period,
was rising
stably from 30% and approached the top for over 80 years. At the same Wrong verb form
rose
time
, the refrigerator's trajectory might be rank
first in Change the form of the verb
ranked
developpment
thanks to the Correct your spelling
development
rocketered
jump to 90% users when it Correct your spelling
rockered
rocketed
was appeared
Change to the active voice
appeared
at
1920.
Change preposition
in
In contrast
, the orbit of the hours of housework per week in the country slightly declined from 50% then
just only got
Verb problem
apply
the
10% at the final Correct article usage
apply
time
that was recorded.Submitted by Alexandre Harvey
on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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