The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram represents how five
tea
types
are being produced from
tea
leaves. At
first
glance, we can notice that the number of
stages
and particular
stages
varies for different
types
of
tea
.
First
of all, we can notice that only white
tea
is produced through five
stages
while
others have six
stages
.
However
, the
first
three
stages
and the
last
one are common for all provided categories of
tea
. Green, Oolong,
Large
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Leaf
Tea
have a roiling stage in comparison with
small
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small-leaf
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leaf
black
tea
which has a crushing stage
instead
of
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it
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. Only green
tea
has been steamed after the
first
three
stages
of the process.
However
, there are
also
extra
stages
for Oolong, Large
Leaf
and Small
Leaf
Tea
before the oven-drying process. So, it is possible to make a conclusion that White
Tea
is the simplest type of
tea
in production as it has the least number of
stages
and each of them is concluded for other
types
of
tea
while
other
types
of teas have some similarities and differences in the production process.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, types, first, stages, leaf with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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