Today,
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are many
people
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to escape
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and move into urban cities.
Therefore
, it is argued that
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in rural areas is reducing considerably. I believe
this
trend has negative effects as it would lead
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demand
for
accomadationsCorrect your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
and
problems like air
.
A shrinking population in
due to
shifting to cities can have a detrimental effect on
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demand
for residencies in
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. It can be noticeable that many
people
come to city
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due to
schooling and job perspectives.
Therefore
, most of the time they move with their families and they want to stay in houses or apartments.If
demand
for
such
is increased, the cost for
such
areas will
also
increase and new apartments need to be constructed.Many city sides are not
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as spacious as
and
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to provide
to build new houses.
On the other hand
, moving a large number of
people
can cause negative impacts on
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. In fact, If
people
move with their families, most of the time they will use their own vehicles.
Therefore
,
it is clear that
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number of
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will increase and it
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adversely affect on environment. The environmental problem is exacerbated by air
due to
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of fuel.
For example
,
According to
the IQ
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website, Karachi in Pakistan is ranked as second
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category.
In conclusion, many
people
reach
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urban areas from rural districts
due to
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perspectives.I strongly believe it may cause
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increase in
demand
for houses and worsen environmental problems. To
this
it is suggested that
should be facilitated with industry and schools.