The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
the table below illustrates data about secondary/high school teachers from five different countries in 2009 received how much in each.
Overall
, Korea and Japan had the lowest initial incomes but had the highest Linking Words
years
taken to reach top Use synonyms
salaries
. Use synonyms
besides
, Luxembourg got the first place for earning the highest. Linking Words
while
Australia and Denmark were two countries that had the most little time to move to leading Linking Words
salaries
.
Obviously, Korea and Japan had the lowest Use synonyms
salaries
at first were 30.500 Use synonyms
dollars
and 28.000 Use synonyms
dollars
, respectively and each year received 52.600 Use synonyms
dollars
and 49.000 Use synonyms
dollars
, which actually took 37 Use synonyms
years
in Korea and 34 Use synonyms
years
in Japan to reach top Use synonyms
salaries
of about 84.500 Use synonyms
dollars
and 62.400 Use synonyms
dollars
in that order. and Use synonyms
then
Luxembourg was the country taking the highest incomes at 80.000 Linking Words
dollars
at the beginning and 112.000 Use synonyms
dollars
per year and Use synonyms
finally
got the maximum of about 139.000 Linking Words
dollars
. Moving to the two Use synonyms
last
countries, which had the at least amount of time to increase Linking Words
salaries
to the maximum, Use synonyms
while
Australia was 9 Linking Words
years
, and Denmark was 8 Use synonyms
years
.Use synonyms
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