The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
the table below illustrates data about secondary/high school teachers from five different countries in 2009 received how much in each.
Overall
, Korea and Japan had the lowest initial incomes but had the highest years
taken to reach top salaries
. besides
, Luxembourg got the first place for earning the highest. while
Australia and Denmark were two countries that had the most little time to move to leading salaries
.
Obviously, Korea and Japan had the lowest salaries
at first were 30.500 dollars
and 28.000 dollars
, respectively and each year received 52.600 dollars
and 49.000 dollars
, which actually took 37 years
in Korea and 34 years
in Japan to reach top salaries
of about 84.500 dollars
and 62.400 dollars
in that order. and then
Luxembourg was the country taking the highest incomes at 80.000 dollars
at the beginning and 112.000 dollars
per year and finally
got the maximum of about 139.000 dollars
. Moving to the two last
countries, which had the at least amount of time to increase salaries
to the maximum, while
Australia was 9 years
, and Denmark was 8 years
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