The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
The table illustrates the salaries of secondary school teachers in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Korea and Japan in the year
of
2009.
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salary
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increase
increased
according to
the seniority of teachers, but they all have a different starting point,
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apply
due to
their own operation and policy in different places.
Firstly
, Korea and Japan have a similar amount of starting salary
, around $30,000, but also
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salary
is Luxembourg, reach to $80,000. Although
they have the
huge differences at the start, the years taken to the peak Correct article usage
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salary
are similarly
the same, from 30 to 37 years.
Secondly
, Australia and Denmark compared to other countries have a middle level of starting salary
. It only take
around 10 Change the verb form
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year
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increased
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to increase
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salary
, However
, the greatest
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recieve
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received
are
lower Correct subject-verb agreement
is
then
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than the
then
other three, become
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