The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The given line graph illustrates the number of
visitors
to an Use synonyms
island
in the Use synonyms
Caribbean
Sea in millions between 2010 and 2017.
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Overall
, the total number of tourists visiting the Linking Words
Caribbean
Use synonyms
island
always increased during the whole period. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
visitors
staying on cruise ships were lower most of the time than Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
.
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To begin
with, in the first 2 years, the total quantity of Linking Words
visitors
to the Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
island
was 1.25 Use synonyms
million
, with approximately six-tenths of them deciding to stay on the Use synonyms
island
, Use synonyms
however
, the rest Linking Words
choose
to rest in ships. In the following 2 years, cruise ships experienced the biggest drop of the whole period with just a total of half a Wrong verb form
chose
million
, Use synonyms
however
, staying on the Linking Words
island
significantly increased and saw its peak with a total sum of 1.5 Use synonyms
million
.
In the Use synonyms
last
year, the Linking Words
Caribbean
Use synonyms
island
experienced a significant increase to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
in total numbers of Use synonyms
visitors
.Use synonyms
While
,the number of cruise ship Linking Words
visitors
witnessed a sharp increase to 2 Use synonyms
million
and saw its highest numbers, Use synonyms
in addition
, staying on the Linking Words
island
kept its peak with 1.5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
of
total Change preposition
apply
visitors
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, caribbean, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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