The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The given line graph illustrates the number of
visitors
to an island
in the Caribbean
Sea in millions between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the total number of tourists visiting the Caribbean
island
always increased during the whole period. In addition
, visitors
staying on cruise ships were lower most of the time than visitors
who stayed on the island
.
To begin
with, in the first 2 years, the total quantity of visitors
to the Caribbean
island
was 1.25 million
, with approximately six-tenths of them deciding to stay on the island
, however
, the rest choose
to rest in ships. In the following 2 years, cruise ships experienced the biggest drop of the whole period with just a total of half a Wrong verb form
chose
million
, however
, staying on the island
significantly increased and saw its peak with a total sum of 1.5 million
.
In the last
year, the Caribbean
island
experienced a significant increase to 3.5 million
in total numbers of visitors
.While
,the number of cruise ship visitors
witnessed a sharp increase to 2 million
and saw its highest numbers, in addition
, staying on the island
kept its peak with 1.5 million
of
total Change preposition
apply
visitors
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