Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign languge can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Currently, multi-language speakers are
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due to
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common
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foreign language which has
negative
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impact on physical and social life. I completely agree with
this
view and will explain the reasons in
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essay. People in a particular country have their own mother
tounge
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tongue
languages but
due to
the advanced technological usage and multicultural diversity, they are influenced by
foriegn
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foreign
trend
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which mostly
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speaking
pattern
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and words.
As a result
, they are facing
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of problems.
Firstly
, social isolation
occur
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as a consequence
of poor communication among
socities
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societies
.
For instance
, if a person
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not know their speaking language, that individual
avoid
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communicating with others in
neighbourhood
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the neighbourhood
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which will
dirrectly
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directly
affect the socialisation that leads to loneliness.
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  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hindrance
  • ineffective communication
  • misunderstandings
  • social isolation
  • language proficiency
  • marginalization
  • civic engagement
  • practical problems
  • accessing services
  • mental health
  • personal growth
  • fostering understanding
  • language barriers
  • translation apps
  • language support services
  • multicultural events
  • inclusive communities
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