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The layout presents the proposed future transformation of the Biology School in the university.

Overall

, a myriad of

woodland

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woodlands

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will be taken to construct new buildings. The updates have improved the accessibility and functionality of the school. The most noticeable alterations will take place at the top of the central library area. The timberland

that is

located between the main road and the indoor sports hall will be replaced by lab and office sites.

However

, these constructions will be leaving behind several existing trees.

Furthermore

, the current drama centre sites will give place to music centres in the future. Apart from that, there will be several buildings below the central library that will soon be renovated, which are the teaching building and the lecture room.

Nevertheless

, the café and IT centre will remain the same. The

last

thing to be renovated is the forest at the bottom of the teaching building. The forest will be developed into a parking area for staff.

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