The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

It is often considered that the threat of nuclear explosions maintains the

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peace.

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, in some cases,

this

technology can be dangerous for

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mankind.

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,

this

essay will elaborate on both positive and negative sides which

further

leads to a logical conclusion. Commencing, in the

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era, crime rates are rising in the cities and in between the countries

although

it is mandatory to keep

weapons

ready to handle every situation.

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, explosive

weapons

are

also

beneficial to make fear in

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so they do not get

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in

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attack

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.

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,

last

year there was an attack between Russia and Ukarane in which Russia

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as they were prepared very well with various kinds of explosive technologies,

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while

Ukarane did not contain enough

weapons

. Probing ahead, there are manyfold drawbacks of having the

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because when it explodes, it covers vast local area, which includes the living of

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population

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and unnecessarily they will

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from

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that nuclear bomb.

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, the explosive bomb

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, if comes in

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hand

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,

then

they will use it abusively and

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, they can use it for their personal purposes.

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explosives are

selling

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in an unauthorised manner and it might be

a

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detrimental

for

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the populace

and

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city

of

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crime

rates

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. In a nutshell, the government should

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laws against the purchase of nuclear bombs, and if

illegally

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marketing is done

then

federal officials should make

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or

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to these persons.

Instead

of using these war

weapons

in urban and rural areas,

it

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should be utilized in the

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.