the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000

the line graph shows the amount of fastfood consumed by astrutalian teeagaer from 1975 to 2000
the graph illustrates the number of young
people
in Australia between 1975 and 2000 by consumed fast food.
overall
, the consumption of pizza and hamburgers increased dramatically from 1975 to 1995 and it was constantly stagnant until 2000.
in contrast
,
fish
and
chips
had a fluctuation
trend
before in 1985,
while
after
this
year the
trend
fell dramatically. The average consumption of pizza and hamburgers by young Australians grew significantly starting from the bottom in 1975 and reaching a peak at 100
people
and around 80
people
in 1995, respectively. Australian youth's consumption of pizza and hamburgers was stagnant for the next five years after an upward
trend
.
However
,
fish
and
chips
decreased slightly from 100
people
in 1975 to roughly over 80% in 1980. afterwards, in 1985 the
trend
of
fish
and
chips
increased slightly to approximately 90
people
.
Although
, the number of young Australians who consumed
fish
and
chips
upward, the
trend
fell significantly around half of the highest point by
fish
and
chips
's
trend
.
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