The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph gives information about the cost change average for each month of three different types of alloys
such
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as
copper
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,
nickel
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and
zinc
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in 2014.
Overall
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, the three commodities experienced a similar fluctuations trend in a year and
nickel
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had the lowest minus of cost variations.
According to
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the data, in the first two months,
nickel
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and
copper
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have slowly decreased compared to
zinc
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which has increased.
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,
copper
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has the lowest rates in May
while
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zinc
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and
nickel
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reach minus at -3% and -1% respectively in June.
In addition
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, all of the commodities picked up again in July and were stable in the three months later. Even though
copper
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,
nickel
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and
zinc
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in October steadily dropped in October,
nickel
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and
zinc
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rose marginally around 2,5 %.
However
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, in November and December, the
copper
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and
zinc
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products pretended to grow up to 1% and the
nickel
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remained at 1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc with synonyms.
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