The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information about the cost change average for each month of three different types of alloys
such
as
copper
,
nickel
and
zinc
in 2014.
Overall
, the three commodities experienced a similar fluctuations trend in a year and
nickel
had the lowest minus of cost variations.
According to
the data, in the first two months,
nickel
and
copper
have slowly decreased compared to
zinc
which has increased.
Then
,
copper
has the lowest rates in May
while
zinc
and
nickel
reach minus at -3% and -1% respectively in June.
In addition
, all of the commodities picked up again in July and were stable in the three months later. Even though
copper
,
nickel
and
zinc
in October steadily dropped in October,
nickel
and
zinc
rose marginally around 2,5 %.
However
, in November and December, the
copper
and
zinc
products pretended to grow up to 1% and the
nickel
remained at 1%.
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