Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?
In
this
modern era, there has been rise
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a rise
the
human activities on the Correct article usage
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earth
due to
which our planet is getting harmed day by day. But some think that it is better to have more experiments which makes the earth
a better place to live. I personally believe that this
type of activities
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activity
affecting
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affects
earth
in form
of Correct article usage
the form
pollution
and resources
depletion. In Change the noun form
resource
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I will elaborate my viewpoint in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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essay,
To begin
with, there are
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is
number
of reasons which are affecting the Change the article
a number
the number
earth
and the most prominent one is pollution
. There are different types of pollution
affecting the life's
of society Change the noun form
lives
life
such
as air, water
and noise pollution
and so on. Due to
the advancement in the
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technology
the production of new cars Add a comma
technology,
are
increasing on Change the verb form
is
the
daily basis which Correct article usage
a
further
encourage
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encourages
the
individuals to buy new Correct article usage
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vehicle
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vehicles
As a result
, it leads to rise
in air Correct article usage
a rise
pollution
which directly affecting
the environment causing Wrong verb form
affects
the
health problems.
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Secondly
, the population is rising at a peak which directly resulting
in Wrong verb form
results
depletion
of resources. The Correct article usage
the depletion
water
level is getting lower due to
its more wastage by the
human beings.Correct article usage
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For example
, the factories are throwing the
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wastage
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waste
in
the rivers which directly Change preposition
into
polluting
the Wrong verb form
pollutes
water
not only making it dirty but also
killing the species
in the water
. Moreover
, due to
the high demand in
luxurious Change preposition
for
houses
the government is cutting more and more trees to make Add a comma
houses,
the
space Correct article usage
apply
also
resulting in the extinction of species
from earth
. Capitalize word
Earth
For instance
, as per Correct article usage
the new
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New York Times
times
the panda Add a comma
times,
species
are on the verge of extinction due to
deforestation.
However
, due
to variety of experiments on Change preposition
apply
earth
helps to research new things but the rise in the temperature Capitalize word
Earth
as a result
of global warming affecting
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affects
the
life on Correct article usage
apply
earth
as well.
In conclusion, Capitalize word
Earth
although
the
human activities Correct article usage
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helps
to figure out something better, the change in climate Change the verb form
help
due to
global warming and species
are
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apply
at the end
of extinction is far important
than new research.Correct quantifier usage
more important
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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.