Some people think that children should only read academic books. Others believe that reading books for pleasure is equally important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been confirmed that reading
books
at a young age is beneficial for cognitive development and language acquisition. Some people debate whether children
should focus only on academic books
or if it would be more convenient to also
read works of fiction. Even though reading in general is great for kids, I think it would be best for them to have equal access to academic and fiction literature.
Academic books
are fundamental for acquiring new knowledge of different subjects. They are specifically designed to make learning fun and easy for all ages. This
is why teachers base their classes on them. In fact, in some subjects, they are the only source of information. For example
, textbooks used to teach math and physics contain all the information and exercises necessary to learn the content of the course. Academic books
are a key part of the learning process and will continue to be.
However
, reading at an early age shouldn't be limited to academic books
. Other types of reading, like fiction, are also
as important when it comes to a child's healthy development. Take for instance
children
's books
, where values and morals are taught through lively characters. Furthermore
, since it's a much more fun way of learning, many teachers complement their lectures with these types of books
. This
keeps the students fully engaged and interested in the subject, as well as
makes them interiorize the information taught more easily.
In conclusion, books
play a big part in shaping children
into the adults the world needs. While
academic books
are necessary to learn about complex topics such
as mathematics and science, non-academic reading is helpful in teaching kids important life values and morals. Making both academic and non-academic books
equally as important for children
to read while
growing up.Submitted by lucia-piriz on
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task achievement
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea that is expanded upon with examples or further explanation. Although the essay introduces relevant points, the argument could be enhanced with more specific examples to illustrate the benefits of both academic and fiction reading for children.
coherence and cohesion
Work on the flow of ideas to make sure the essay easily leads the reader from one point to the next within and between paragraphs. Transitions could be smoother and more varied in order to guide the reader more seamlessly through your arguments.
coherence and cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points, but it could be improved by more clearly stating your personal opinion and explaining why you hold that view based on the arguments provided in the essay.
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