the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 o2020 , with prediction for 2030 and 2040. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 o2020 , with prediction for 2030 and 2040. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates details on percentages of residents in four native asian territories living in urban areas from 1970 to 2020 and with forecast for 2030 to 2040.
Overall
, with little fluctuations, all four nations, the Philippines, Malaysia,Thailand and Indonesia depict
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an increased
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in their percentage of populace in urban areas from 1970 to 2020.
However
,
thereafter
, it was predicted more or less a continuous increase nearly at the same rate with Malaysia standing out from the rest of the nations. In detail, Philippine natives showed the highest amount of urban civilization of the total
population
in 1970 around 33% ,and slightly less at 30% for Malaysians following them.
Thereafter
, the Philippine city
population
gradually increased till 1980, and afterwards,they depicted a sharp rise till 1990 to nearly 50 % of the total civilization in the Philippines .
However
,
then
a sudden drop happened up to 2010 to reduce the metropolitan area
population
to approximately 40 % of the sum .
After
this
, steady urbanisation of
population
happened in the Philippines up to 2020 and is forecast till 2040,
also
following the same trend.
On the other hand
, Philippine people in metro areas gradually increased with varying rates up to 2020, and the forecast followed the same trend to achieve nearly 80% urban civilization in 2040,
this
was the highest foresighted urban
population
in these four countries.
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