The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
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The two maps above illustrate the comparison of a waterfront
area
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in the city of Darwin in 2009 and 2014. In general, the southern part where industries conducted business in 2009 was transformed into public facilities,
such
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as a building for a university and a harbour in the next 5 years. The city had an additional swimming
pool
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in 2014 and 3 more buildings for its residents. As the map shows, in 2009 there was a lake surrounded by a convention centre on the north, a school on the west, and a swimming
pool
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on the east side. Next to it, there was a small industrial
area
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which was separated by a
footpath
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and 3 residential buildings from the larger one. The
footpath
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also
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split 2 swimming pools on the east, two of these pools located beside the ocean. Compared to 2014, the city had the same arrangement of a school, a convention centre, and a northern swimming
pool
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.
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, the small industrial
area
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was switched into an additional swimming
pool
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.
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, the large industrial
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was
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replaced by a greenery
area
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, which was split by a
footpath
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. On its northern side was built a building for the university and 3 additional buildings for its residents.
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the southern part planted some trees.
At the end
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of
this
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footpath
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which connected to the sea, there was a new harbour for ships pulling over.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, pool, footpath with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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