Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming what measures can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Nowadays, the world is facing several problems which occur because of humans. One of the important

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is global warming. There are a lot of reasons for

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but steps can be taken to tackle

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problem

. In my opinion, the main reasons for

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problem

are humans want to enjoy

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their life and demand a number of valuable things from

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nature and do not protect the environment. At

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people want to live in industrial cities which have all

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. They construct a lot of

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and plants which can manufacture a variety of useful items for daily life. At the same

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individuals do not protect

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nature. The

factories

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people use produce harmful gasses and waste. It can cause

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pollution. It is very dangerous to live in polluted cities. It has many negative aspects for humans’ health and

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flora and fauna.

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this

problem

.

Firstly

, the government have to change the situation of the

factories

. They have to create eco-friendly

factories

instead

of traditional plants. It helps to decrease the garbage.

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and all

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in one area have to stop cutting trees.

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they should create green parks in large

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of the city. And hunters must

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stop killing all creatures in wildlife.

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our nature might be pure and clean. In conclusion, our planet will continue to face

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of environmental problems unless

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and all individuals follow the scientists’ advice.