The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1978 and 2003.
The line chart demonstrates how much of four different types of meat were consumed in a specific country in Europe over a twenty-five-year period from 1978 to 2003.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the popularity of chicken rose considerably, Linking Words
while
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this
figure for the three other sorts of meat witnessed a fall.
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Also
evident is in 1978 beef was consumed the most among people at about 220 grams per person per week, Linking Words
while
fish was the lowest at around 55. Linking Words
However
, the beef and fish consumption decreased to 110 and 55 respectively by the end of the period in question.
As can be seen, at the beginning of the period both chicken and lamb were consumed the same amount at 150 grams. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, after experiencing a fluctuation throughout half of a decade between 1983 and 1988, the former soared to 250 grams and the latter Linking Words
plummet
to 60. Wrong verb form
plummeted
Moreover
, in 2003 chicken was the most popular, Linking Words
while
fish remained the least popular.Linking Words
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