The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the
process
of producing soft cheese.
Overall
the
process
consists of 5 stages starting with mixing some components and ending with filtering a soft cheese. At the beginning of the
process
, the water and milk are mixed together to make
milk
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the milk
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lighter and
then
it
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is reduced their temperature to 5
degrees
Celsius for 2 hours in the cooling machine. After that, it is filled more with salt before going through a fermentation
process
in which it is heated to 35
degrees
Celsius for 2 hours. Once it is done, it is increased temperature to 100
degrees
for 8 hours
untill
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until
it has
evaporate
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the steam out which is called
evaporation
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the evaporation
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process
. In the next stage of the
process
, the rest liquid is cooled again
in
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at
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5
degrees
Celsius which
that is
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changed
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some parts of it into a thick liquid.
Then
waste water is filtered out from the cooling machine. In the
last
of the
process
, the rest part is filtered as well out of another way and it is turned into a soft cheese which is ready for consumption.
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