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the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates
average
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the average
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 change in the rate of copper, nickel and zink during the year 2014.
Overall
, all three metal prices fluctuated during each
month
 of the year 2014.
However
, during the initial 4-5
months
 period
price
 fluctuated above the average of
last
month
's percentage, and below during the next 4-5
months
, followed again by a rose in the
last
 2
months
. in detail, nickel
price
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prices
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 fluctuated highest in the
month
 of January achieving 6% above the average of
last
month
.
However
, that trend reduced drastically during the next 2
months
 period to achieve only a 1% difference from the
last
month
 at the beginning of
march
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 2014.
Thereaftre
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Thereafter
, with a
month
 of
the
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 steady rate at 1% ,its
price
 again dropped to achieve the lowest of all time, -3% in the
month
 of July, and by the mid of
Octomber
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October
, it wasn't recovered the 0% mark .
On the other hand
, copper
price
also
 followed the same trend as
the
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nickel with fewer fluctuations. Meanwhile, zinc elicited the least fluctuations of the three to maintain its
price
 above the 0% mark
by
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most of the
months
 in the year .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words month, months, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 5 times.
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