Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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Nowadays, despite the scientific achievements, the absolute majority of people
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that we need to do our best to protect the environment. After all, a fair part of these likens animals to humans and believes that all experiments with the animal kingdom should be forbidden forever. In
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first glance, some creatures especially most of mammals are really similar to us in many senses.
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, it has been scientifically proven that large-brained ones are able to experience feelings and emotions like us.
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, it is utterly a bad idea to exploit and hurt our so-called smaller friends and it would be highly reasonable to take care and protect them
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. On the flip side of the coin, without experimentation on
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we would have never succeeded the modern-day progress at all.
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, many medicines would not be available nowadays etc. The reason is absolutely straightforward: we have much in common with mammals;
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, because of being belong to the same class and
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, we descended from (one/a) common ancestor
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Darwin’s theory.
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, we have similar genetics and morphological features and for those
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we have only (one/a) wise and justifiable decision – to resort to conducting some research on rats, apes etc. just to avoid
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identical ones on humans. In conclusion,
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we cannot completely avoid conducting research on animals, there are sometimes a lot of indirect ways to investigate something.
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, programming is just one of them. Experts can build a model with the help of programs.
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, our bodies’ structures are complicated and not all mathematical models show a real picture and programming in
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direct studies and research are necessary and have to be done but it is highly critical to find the golden ratio in
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Your essay provides a balanced view of the issue, but try to provide more specific examples to strengthen your arguments. Instead of general statements, provide data or real examples where possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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