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Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the types of
books
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 that the population under 30
years
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 old is reading, and the table depicts the data on
book
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 reading in three age
groups
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.
Overall
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, the vast majority of people under 30
years
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 old
is
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are
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 reading print
books
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while
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 the remaining options are being read
relatively
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by relatively
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 lower percentages. The highest participation for
book
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 reading is exhibited by from 16 to 17
years
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 old
teenageers
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teenagers
teenager
. All age
groups
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 are reading print
books
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 with the highest participation fractions compared to other reading materials, and around 85% of between 16 and 17
years
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 old teenagers are reading them. The remaining
groups
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 are reading physical
books
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 with just above 70% each. The proportions of audiobook and e-
book
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 reading are varied between just above a tenth to just above a fifth in different age
groups
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. From 16 to 17
years
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 old people read 12
books
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 in 2012, representing the highest reading participation with 90% of 16-17
years
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 old teenagers
are
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apply
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reading a
book
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. The numbers of
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book
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books
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that
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apply
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read by other
groups
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 were 11 each for 18-24 and 25-29
years
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 old
groups
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 in that year.
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