Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task.

The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar graph illustrates the types of
books
that the population under 30
years
old is reading, and the table depicts the data on
book
reading in three age
groups
.
Overall
, the vast majority of people under 30
years
old
is
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are
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reading print
books
while
the remaining options are being read
relatively
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by relatively
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lower percentages. The highest participation for
book
reading is exhibited by from 16 to 17
years
old
teenageers
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teenagers
teenager
. All age
groups
are reading print
books
with the highest participation fractions compared to other reading materials, and around 85% of between 16 and 17
years
old teenagers are reading them. The remaining
groups
are reading physical
books
with just above 70% each. The proportions of audiobook and e-
book
reading are varied between just above a tenth to just above a fifth in different age
groups
. From 16 to 17
years
old people read 12
books
in 2012, representing the highest reading participation with 90% of 16-17
years
old teenagers
are
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apply
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reading a
book
. The numbers of
book
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books
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that
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apply
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read by other
groups
were 11 each for 18-24 and 25-29
years
old
groups
in that year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, years, book, groups with synonyms.
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