The pie charts below show the selected causes of death as a percentage of all deaths of registered Indians and the total population in 1992.
the given
pie chart indicates the proportions of different reasons for Verb problem
The
mortality
of indian people who are between 18 and 22 years old and Correct article usage
the mortality
total
population in 1992.
Correct article usage
the total
overall
, accidents was
the main reason for death, Change the verb form
were
although
heart disease constituted the least
percentage of mortality rate.Correct word choice
lowest
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