The charts below show the proportions of the wor/d's oíl resources he/din different areas, together with the proportions consumed annual/y in the same areas. Summarise the information by se/ecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chat that we are about to study, represents the
oil
resources
that certain regions have and the part of these resources
that they consume annually.
Overall
, we can observe that the territories with more oil
resources
have less oil
consumption then
the countries with little Replace the word
than
oil
resources
.
In fact, the Middle East shows 56,52 points in oil
resources
and only 6,15 points in oil
consumption annually.
However
, regions like Asia, United
States and Western Europe Correct article usage
the United
who
have the lowest Correct pronoun usage
apply
porcentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
oil
resources
(2,85% / 1,85% / 1,47%), present
the highest Correct word choice
and present
oil
use every year (26,21% / 25,48% / 15,24%).Submitted by santos_dij on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, resources with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼