Task one the two pie charts show the patron of expenditure in US between 1966-1996. Summarise the information by selecting the reporting and main feature and making comparisons where relevant
the given
pie charts indicate the percentages of expenses in Verb problem
The
American
from 1966 to 1996.
Correct your spelling
America
overall
, food and cars constituted the most amount of costs in 1966 and 1996.
moving onto detail, food which was
accounted for almost 50% in 1966, experienced a sharp decrease to one-seventh in 1996. Unnecessary verb
apply
in addition
, books fell to one-sixth in 1996, unlike restaurants which doubled in
Change preposition
apply
this
year. moreover
, cars get nearly doubled in 1996 as well.
on the other hand
, computers, and furnitures
didn't Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
experienced
a notable Change the verb form
experience
chang
between 1966 and 1996 and their percentages were all under 11%.Correct your spelling
change
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