You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Describe the file •Ask him/her to return it to you by post.
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Dear Sam,
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant of
health and good spirits . I had Change preposition
apply
amazing
time with you in Australia during Add an article
an amazing
business
conference and it will be Add an article
the business
forever
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a forever
memories
for me .
I am writing Fix the agreement mistake
memory
this
letter to inform you that I forget
my crucial file at your home in the cupboard , the colour of the file is green and my name is written on it . Verb problem
left
This
file will decide my promotion in my multinational company as assistant manager, also
it has all the information about the accounts , thus
I have to submit it to my manager on
next month.
Whenever you have time send it to me via post , speed would be the magnificent option , Change preposition
apply
this
way I will receive it within few
days . Correct article usage
a few
Moreover
, I need to do
some amendments Verb problem
make
in
that file for excellent results.
I am looking forward Change preposition
to
hearing
from you.
Yours truly,
HarvinderChange preposition
to hearing
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logical structure
Ensure the letter has a clear and logical structure with an introductory sentence, body paragraphs, and a conclusive ending. The logical sequence could be enhanced.
greeting and closing
Consider using a more appropriate greeting and closing for a semi-formal or informal letter. While 'Dear Sam' is suitable, 'Yours truly' is a bit formal for writing to a friend.
single idea per paragraph
Make each paragraph focus on a single idea, such as describing the file in one paragraph, the importance of the file in another, and the request to send the file in the final one.
complete response
Make sure your letter fully addresses all the bullet points in the task. Include more specific details about the file and a clearer request for its return.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone should be consistent with the relationship with the recipient. As this is a letter to a friend, maintain a friendly and informal tone throughout.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,