It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are contrasting views that some

children

have an inborn

talent

for example

for sport or music,

while

others feel that any

children

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is able to

develope

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develop

such

these

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skills

by learning regardless of being gifted or not.

This

essay will

explaine

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explain

why I believe that many

of

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children

can be

tought

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taught

tough

skills

whether they are talented or not.

Firstly

, talents and genes play a vital role in

getting

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becoming

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successful and making considerable progress in

the

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most areas.

This

is because it would make the learning process easier and faster as a catalyst to some extent as the trainee is already gifted and there is no necessity to devote much time to practicing.

For instance

, a kid with a

music

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talent

spend

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a certain amount of time

on

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playing a musical instrument daily, he would

probabely

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probably

experience a

level up

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in

this

field in

comparision

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comparison

with an ungifted kid. The argument goes that in order to triumph,

talent

plays an essential role.

However

, I argue that

children

can be

tought

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taught

tough

skills

without considering genes as long as they are passionate and motivated, and

thus

they become competent musicians or professional

athelits

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athletes

athletics

athlete

. The reason for

this

is that

,

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individuals who have a great passion for learning a skill

are

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are also satisfied

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also

satisfy with devoting a huge amount of energy and time to upgrade or

learn

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learning

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their

favorite

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favourite

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skills

. As

the

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result, they are more likely to become a

professon

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professional

and excel in what they do as they are

eagerd

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eager

to improve.

Conversely

, if they were solely talented without having the impetus to

mastery

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, they might not get as

master

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as a hardworking child. In conclusion,

although

it is of critical importance that having

talent

could help to boost someone's

skills

, I feel that being successful is much more

depends

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dependent

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on

hardworking

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hard work

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and motivation.