The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tonnes) for several types of vegetables.

The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tonnes) for several types of vegetables.
The given pie charts indicate the amount of the variety of vegetables which were imported from Qatari and
Oman
in 1990.
Overall
, spinach and garlic were imported more than other vegetables in both countries in 1990. Moving onto detail, spinach which accounted for almost one-third of the whole imports in
Qatar
, was approximately one-fourth in
Oman
.
on the other hand
,
Oman
's peas import was nearly threefold of
Qatar
's.
in addition
, garlic which
was
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stood for 340 in
Qatar
, constituted roughly 50 per cent of
Oman
's imports.
it is clear that
amount of the imports not only for
Qatar
but
also
for
Oman
was the same.
moreover
, broccoli was imported in the two countries with the eighty difference in number.
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