The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011.
The diagram compares information about the
number
of people
who visited five different art exhibitions in the year 2011.
Based on the information presented, the majority of people
visited the Louvre gallery in France, whereas
the State Hermitage exhibition in Russia encountered a small number
of visitors
. Additionally
, there was a marginal difference in the number
of people
who visited the Metropolitan Museum
and the British Museum
.
As regards the Louvre gallery, around 9 million
visitors
visited this
exhibition. In addition
, there was a slight disparity in the number
of people
who attended both the Metropolitan Museum
in the USA and the British Museum
in the UK(approximately 200,000 people
). Moreover
, Over 3 million
visitors
visited the National Museum
of Korea. Furthermore
, the museum
del Pardo in Spain experienced a negligible quantity of Capitalize word
Museum
visitors
, at only 3 million
. Lastly
, a minority of people
(roughly 2.7 million
) visited the state of Hermitage in Russia in the year 2011.Submitted by iimux771 on
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