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The tables show how many international students studies in Canada and the United States by county of orign

The tables show how many international students studies in Canada and the United States by county of orign
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This
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 table provides information about alcohol-related
deaths
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 in seven countries in 2005.
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, there is a clear correlation between the
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 of
beer
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 consumed per capita and the number of alcohol-related
deaths
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. It can be deduced from the table that the greatest
beer
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consumption
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 in 2002 was to be found in the Czech Republic, Germany and Austria and that each of these regions
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 had by far the largest
litres
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 of alcohol-related
deaths
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 in 2005. The Czech Republic, with the greatest
beer
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consumption
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 per litre, namely over a hundred and thirty in 2002,
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 experienced well over one million
litres
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 alcohol-related
deaths
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 by 2005. The region with the second highest
beer
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consumption
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 was Germany, with nearly 107
litres
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, and it
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 recorded the second highest number of alcohol-related
deaths
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, namely 1.185 million. In all regions except Canada, it can be seen that the higher
beer
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consumption
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, the higher the alcohol-related mortality rate. It is interesting that in Canada, with the lowest level of
beer
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consumption
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, at 86 per capita, the mortality rate was the high as in Ireland, namely 0.58 million,
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 in the latter the
consumption
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 level was high. Other health or economic factors must be involved. In conclusion, it is
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 interesting to note that in each case the number of female
deaths
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 was significantly lower than that of males, which seems to be a reflection of the fact that in general far fewer women than men drink.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words deaths, litres, beer, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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