The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line and pie charts
provides
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information about international
pineapple
convey
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by the top three
pineapple producing
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pineapple-producing
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countries in two years
which is
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,
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2009 and 2019.
Moreover
, the dropped of the
expendture
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expenditure
to the consumer
each
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pineapple
in terms of 7 important categories in 2019.
Overall
,
Country
A
is
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the highest one trading
pineapple
in 2019,
while
Country
C
is
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was
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the lowest
on
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in
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trading in neither year. The most
category
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common categories
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fall down was
the
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apply
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Distribution and retail. As
it
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shown
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on
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in
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figure
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,
Country
B
is
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started with 5 Metric
tonnes
more than other countries which
are
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can not
reached
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2 Metric
tonnes
in 2009.
Subsequently
,
Country
A increased suddenly to
approximetly
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approximately
10 Metric
tonnes
in 2019,
while
Country
B
significant
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decreased to 1.8 Metric
tonnes
,
whereas
Country
C
increaceced
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increased
slightly to 1. Distribution and retail accounts for 35% of the total breakdown of the cost
each
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pineapple
.
However
, profit and taxes get similar
expenture
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expenditure
which one
take
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18% and other takes 16%. The lowest
expenture
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expenditure
are Prodecer which take 5% and Export costs with rate 4%.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, country, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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