The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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provides
information about international Change the verb form
provide
pineapple
convey
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conveyed
pineapple producing
countries in two yearsAdd a hyphen
pineapple-producing
which is
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,
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, the dropped of the expendture
to the consumer Correct your spelling
expenditure
each
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of each
pineapple
in terms of 7 important categories in 2019.
Overall
, Country
A is
the highest one trading Wrong verb form
was
pineapple
in 2019, while
Country
C is
the lowest Wrong verb form
was
on
trading in neither year. The most Change preposition
in
category
fall down was Replace the word
common categories
the
Distribution and retail.
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is shown
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in
figure
, Add an article
the figure
Country
B is
started with 5 Metric Unnecessary verb
apply
tonnes
more than other countries which are
can not Unnecessary verb
apply
reached
2 Metric Change the verb form
reach
tonnes
in 2009. Subsequently
, Country
A increased suddenly to approximetly
10 Metric Correct your spelling
approximately
tonnes
in 2019, while
Country
B significant
decreased to 1.8 Metric Change the word
significantly
tonnes
, whereas
Country
C increaceced
slightly to 1.
Distribution and retail accounts for 35% of the total breakdown of the cost Correct your spelling
increased
each
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of each
pineapple
. However
, profit and taxes get similar expenture
which one Correct your spelling
expenditure
take
18% and other takes 16%. The lowest Change the verb form
takes
expenture
are Prodecer which take 5% and Export costs with rate 4%.Correct your spelling
expenditure
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