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In many countries, formal exams are used to assess students’ abilities and to judge the success of their education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using formal exams to assess students’ abilities? Do you think the benefits of using formal exams outweigh the drawbacks?

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Students
 in some countries take official
exams
 that are provided by top officials to evaluate
students
' abilities.
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 children less confident,
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the advantages
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 of taking
exams
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outweight
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outweigh
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 because
this
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 method to assess and improve
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the quality
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 of
learnings
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learning
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 in
schools
. Governments provide general guidelines and standards to ensure that all
students
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oportunity
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opportunity
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 level of education.
However
, every
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diffrent
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different
 approaches
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have
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different
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a different
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 ability to learn things.
While
 some may have supportive parents, some may not.
Therefore
,
while
 some
schools
 are more
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student-oriented
, some may not. Because of
this
 reason, some countries set
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exams
 in every
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school
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 to assess the
students
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 general ability
,
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 and
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the
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how effective
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the educational system
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 how well
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teachers'
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 performance
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.
For example
, in my country,
exams
 are held each year for every
pupils
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 in each grade. If the
overall
 performance of the school is poor, its management would be ordered to take additional steps to enhance general performance.
Nevertheless
, there could be
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 minor disadvantage of imposing formal
exams
 for pupils. All
exams
 cannot assess
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student's
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 general ability accurately.
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Consequently
, children tend to be discouraged
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learining
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learning
 things when they get lower scores, or by comparing others'
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performance
. Particularly, mandating
exams
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elementary
schools
 is not appropriate. it
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 them more
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, thinking
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 as bad and foolish
ones
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.
For example
,
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 years ago in my country, pupils in elementary school are exempted from formal
exams
. In conclusion, I believe that
benefits
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 of taking
exams
 are more
outweight
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outweigh
 of
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 drawbacks
,
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 because it can be
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to evaluate
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for evaluating
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 the existing education system
,
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 and
further
 improvements.
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