Some people say that now they can see films on theur, phones or tablets. there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films, need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both· these,views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that the best
way
to watch movies
is through our phones or tablets while
others believe that the cinema
is the best option for enjoying a film. This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail, and show why I believe that watching movies
from our technological devices might be better.
On the one hand, many individuals opt to go to the cinema
as a way
to go out and do something fun. Furthermore
, the cinema
offers something that may be impossible to have at home which is the four dimensions of movies
. In addition
, that is
a fantastic technology development that makes you feel that you are part of the movie. According to
a recent survey that was made in Uruguay, 80% of the population said that going to the cinema
once a month is a must!
On the other hand
, watching movies
or TV shows from our devices is a good option as well, Moreover
, platforms such
as Netflix and Amazon Prime, offer a wide range of movies
for a small fee of less than ten dollars per month, while
cinema
tickets usually cost over twenty dollars. Although
it does not have the same magic as the cinema
, watching a movie in our house is much more pleasant as we can rest on the couch in our pyjamas. A recent article suggests that due to
people's hectic lives, they prefer to stay at home instead
of going out and also
opt for this
as a way
of saving money.
To sum up
, even though going to the cinema
could be a good plan and a way
to have fun, I would say that opting to stay at home and watch a movie there is definitely far better. Not only because is more cozy but also
since is a way
to save money.Submitted by jimeilaria on
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The essay gives a balanced discussion about both sides of the argument, showing that you can consider different perspectives before presenting your own opinion.
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You have used relevant and specific examples to support your points, such as the recent survey in Uruguay and platforms like Netflix and Amazon Prime.