One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.
Dear Tim,
I'm writing to
advice
you about how to improve your Replace the word
advise
English
especially
listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.
Moving to a new place, Sydney is a good opportunity for you to explore different countries, their languages and their cultures. Add the comma(s)
, especially
This
is a really good idea to improve your English
in advance as it will not only help you to talk but, will also
help you to understand basic things.
I'd like you to take some basic English
classes like Ielts
or PTE because these exams Correct your spelling
IELTS
are consist
of 4 modules speaking, listening, writing, and reading. In listening Change the verb form
consist
class
they will be playing Add a comma
class,
a
audio of some random conversations Change the article
apply
adn
you need to answer the questions Correct your spelling
and
accordingly
. If you wanna practice more than
I would recommend you to watch Correct your spelling
then
English
movies with subtitles to get a better idea about how to talk. For speaking skills, the exam is going to help you by giving you a topic to talk about for 2 minutes adn
Correct your spelling
and
then
you'll be having some basic conversation with the instructor. To improve your vocabulary don't go for reading books, as they are written in very
formal way and are not going to help you at all. Try to Add an article
a very
listen
podcasts in Add the preposition
listen to
English
because you will get a better understanding of words and where to use it
accurately.
I wish you all the best for your new journey and will catch you up soon. Don't forget to keep me updated Correct pronoun usage
them
with
your progress.
Best wishes,
SamChange preposition
on
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Coherence Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the advice you're giving, and avoid mixing different ideas in one paragraph. This strengthens the structure and clarity of your message.
Coherence Cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your letter and make it easier to understand the relationship between ideas.
Task Achievement
Address all parts of the prompt thoroughly, ensuring you provide clear and expanded advice for listening skills, speaking skills, and vocabulary as asked.
General
Work on checking your writing for spelling and grammar mistakes to enhance clarity and accuracy, which is vital for effective communication.
Task Achievement
Consider using more formal language where appropriate, as informality can sometimes detract from the authority of the advice given.