One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

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Dear Tim, I'm writing to

advice

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you about how to improve your

English

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especially

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, especially

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listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary. Moving to a new place, Sydney is a good opportunity for you to explore different countries, their languages and their cultures.

This

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is a really good idea to improve your

English

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in advance as it will not only help you to talk but, will

also

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help you to understand basic things. I'd like you to take some basic

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classes like

Ielts

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IELTS

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or PTE because these exams

are consist

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consist

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of 4 modules speaking, listening, writing, and reading. In listening

class

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class,

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they will be playing

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apply

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audio of some random conversations

adn

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and

you need to answer the questions

accordingly

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. If you wanna practice more

than

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then

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I would recommend you to watch

English

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movies with subtitles to get a better idea about how to talk. For speaking skills, the exam is going to help you by giving you a topic to talk about for 2 minutes

adn

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and

then

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you'll be having some basic conversation with the instructor. To improve your vocabulary don't go for reading books, as they are written in

very

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formal way and are not going to help you at all. Try to

listen

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listen to

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podcasts in

English

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because you will get a better understanding of words and where to use

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them

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accurately. I wish you all the best for your new journey and will catch you up soon. Don't forget to keep me updated

with

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your progress. Best wishes, Sam

harneet2001kaurThu Feb 08 2024

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Coherence Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the advice you're giving, and avoid mixing different ideas in one paragraph. This strengthens the structure and clarity of your message.

Coherence Cohesion

Use a variety of linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your letter and make it easier to understand the relationship between ideas.

Task Achievement

Address all parts of the prompt thoroughly, ensuring you provide clear and expanded advice for listening skills, speaking skills, and vocabulary as asked.

General

Work on checking your writing for spelling and grammar mistakes to enhance clarity and accuracy, which is vital for effective communication.

Task Achievement

Consider using more formal language where appropriate, as informality can sometimes detract from the authority of the advice given.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

250 words

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SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT MANUFACTURER and supermarket have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with alot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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