The bar chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in last 3 years,between 3years to 5 years,not within the last 5 years
The chart depicts the numbers of
people
who have moved house
either in the last
3 years
, between 3 to 5 years
, and not moved house
in the last
5 years
.
Overall
, most people
from different ages in the given timeframe moved house
3 to 5 years
ago, followed by people
moving house
in the last
3 years
and not moving house
in the last
5 years
.
Two groups of individuals aged 20-29 and aged 30-39 have a similar pattern with just only a number difference of someone moving house
3 to 5 years
ago and moved house
in the last
3 years
. Both units stood at around 45 and 33. Furthermore
, the Fix the agreement mistake
number
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
people
that did not move house
reached 22.
Subsequently
, 55 of
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apply
people
aged 40 to 49 moved house
within 3 to 5 years
ago, with 31 individuals moved
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moving
house
in the last
3 years
, and only 14 people
did not move house
. Lastly
, a group of people
older than 50 had around 41 people
moving house
within 3 to 5 years
or not moving house
at all and 15 people
moving house
in the last
3 years
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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