The care of the children is
crutial
for progenitors, Correct your spelling
crucial
critical
this
reason makes Linking Words
parents
take important decisions in order to give the best guidance to their prole. Use synonyms
That is
why some Linking Words
parents
prefer raising them in cities meanwhile others think is better Use synonyms
guide
in Verb problem
to live
a
Correct article usage
the
countryside
. In Use synonyms
this
essay, it will be elucidated both Linking Words
point
of view and my personal opinion will be given.
Fix the agreement mistake
points
Firstly
, fostering Linking Words
an
holistic growth in a Correct article usage
apply
city
is easier and more convenient for immediate relatives. Children in a Use synonyms
city
are close to important facilities Use synonyms
such
as hospitals, kindergartens, schools, amusement parks, sports Linking Words
center
, cinemas, Fix the agreement mistake
centers
shopping
malls, amongst others, which provide the perfect environment for the young. Correct word choice
and shopping
In addition
, it's a strong Linking Words
likely
to find other infants in which they can interact and learn from their mistakes. Replace the word
likelihood
For instance
, children who behave naughty can acknowledge Linking Words
easier
and express their emotions in front of adults when the mistake is shared. Rephrase
more easily
As a result
, Linking Words
the
teens who grow Correct article usage
apply
in
a Change preposition
up in
city
enhance strong maturity, social skills and Use synonyms
a
enjoyable lifestyle. Change the article
an
However
, they are exposed to hazards with mortal consequences like pollution, criminality, or worse,Linking Words
get
involved with drugs or prostitution.
Wrong verb form
getting
On the other hand
, the calm and big-hearted lifestyle of farms in the Linking Words
countryside
Use synonyms
provide
self-confidence and thrived growth to the infant. Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
Besides
, Linking Words
meanwhile
they can't enjoy entertainment facilities they can use their own property in order to enhance their own intelligence and force. As a sample, a kid Add a comma
meanwhile,
grown
Wrong verb form
growing
in
the outskirts developed important skills like applied knowledge in math, economics, agriculture, veterinary, construction, and other aspects like good habits Change preposition
up in
as
cleaning, organizing, and administrating properties. Correct quantifier usage
such as
As a consequence
, the teens who Linking Words
learned
in Wrong verb form
learn
Use synonyms
countryside
are more adapted, financially Add an article
the countryside
better-off
and Correct your spelling
better off
excellent
health Change preposition
in excellent
condition
. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
Nevertheless
, they can't develop social skills and Linking Words
can
manifest properly their emotions. Verb problem
apply
Thus
, in some cases, the lack of Linking Words
interacting
with Replace the word
interaction
other
can produce Fix the agreement mistake
others
psychology
issues and Replace the word
psychological
unstable
lifestyle.
Correct article usage
an unstable
To sum up
, we consider both sides of the table and it can be concluded that each point of view has its pros and cons. Expressed Linking Words
simple
, Change the word
simply
parents
can decide both sides without feeling guilty. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, in my personal opinion, I agree that brood should Linking Words
raise
in cities. In a nutshell, nowadays we are living in a Wrong verb form
be raised
globalizated
world where all are connected. Correct your spelling
globalised
Also
, Linking Words
the
communication and interaction amongst Correct article usage
apply
are
more important than Correct quantifier usage
others are
a
individual growth. Remove the article
apply
Therefore
, I recommend for future Linking Words
parents
involve the guidance of their prole in a Use synonyms
city
environment than the Use synonyms
countryside
.Use synonyms