The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011

The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011
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The information about annual rainfall in Brazilia during the years between 2001 and 2011 is depicted by a rendered bar graph.
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, it can be seen that the highest level of rain showers was observed at the beginning of the year, which decreased gradually until mid-year and
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took a subsequent peak
at the end
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of the year. In January,
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data, the highest rainfall was marked, which accounted for 247.4 mm,
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, after that, there was a gradual decline observed until June month, when only 8.7
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of
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was noted. Which was accounted at its lowest level in the whole period and
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considered Brazilia's dry season.
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, from July to December, the level of precipitation of rainfall started to grow substantially, and that was reported at 11.1 mm to 246.0mm respectively.
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, the first three months and the
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three months of the year were considered rainstorm months.
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  • annual rainfall
  • millimeters
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • anomaly
  • climatic event
  • precipitation
  • hydrological cycle
  • evaporation
  • condensation
  • meteorological data
  • arid
  • humid
  • drought
  • flood
  • sustainable water management
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