There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive and a negative development?

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Topic Vocabulary:

Outrage culture
Amplification
Economic hardship
Sensationalist
Polarization
Constructive outcomes
Social frustration
Divisiveness
Societal norms
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There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive and a negative development?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

Some educationalists think that a programme of international exchange visits is beneficial to all teenage school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?