It is certainly true that almost all
people
are buying online
instead
of physically going to
stores
. I think
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It is very useful for
people
. I will explain more below.
Nowadays, some
people
are purchasing online more and more
instead
of going to
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. On the one hand, it is very useful for them because
this
condition is very easy and there are many
products
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the
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.
Besides
that, online
stores
are very fast delivering but
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may
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because there are some problems.
In addition
,
onlineCorrect article usage
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market
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comfortable for
people
.
For instance
, many information is
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about the
products
,
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clientAdd an article
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must know about the product.
For example
,
last
week I bought a new phone and I know about the phone.
That is
, I told
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store is very convenient and online
stores
are increasing year by year.
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the other hand, there are some negative aspects
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.
For instance
, some
products
may
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quality and clients buy these
products
.
That is
, clients can apply to the online store. Usually, more and more I use the online
market
but some
products
may
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quality. It is
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unpleasant condition.
Then
, I
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to
onlineAdd an article
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market
.
Besides
that, online markets are conducting obesity because
people
are not attempting.
That is
,
people
should go to the
market
, for obesity is losing from
this
situation. In my opinion, simple
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are losing in
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future.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that
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more and more are purchasing online
instead
of physically going to
stores
.
This
condition is useful for
people
but there are some negative aspects to
people
.