Introduce yourself • Say why you are interested in this sports club • Ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs.

Dear Sir My full name is Mokhinur Ibragimova. My family, English course and friends call me Mokhi, Moxi and Mokhishim.
This
is my nickname. I am 19 years old. I love
sports
club
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very much. Because
sports
training and various competitions are always held there. Most importantly, you can find all
sports
equipment, tennis, ball, chess, rope, volleyball, bask, soccer ball and handball. If you go to a
sports
club
, practice you can find everything to do.
This
is the part I like and the most comfortable. Sorry, I wanted to ask you some questions about the
club
. Are the facilities in the
sports
club
well-built and solid, and are the members of the
club
well-behaved, can they get
along with
everyone? My next question is, how much will the costs be, is it not too expensive, will it be paid in
installments
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, or should it be 100%? Can you give me information about these questions
.
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Yours sincerely Mokhinur
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