You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Landlord,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. I'm Srinivas, along with
my family are living in your house. probably you might not know me because I did not come with my father when he met you. I'm writing this
letter to inform you that some of the furniture in the apartment is not in good condition.
Coming into the details, the air conditioning is not working to its fullest, when turned on it takes almost 15 minutes just to start and hours to cool the entire house. Furthermore
, the fridge is making some rattling sound, this
may be because of the ups and downs in the electricity passage, making it difficult to sleep at night.
Moreover
, I would be pleased if you send an electrician as soon as possible, and get them fixed, or take the necessary steps to solve the issue. In addition
, my exams are coming soon, it would be appreciated if you fix the problem. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Srinivas Varma.Submitted by varmaib1 on
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Task Achievement
Begin with a more detailed introduction of yourself and your family's situation for a personal touch, enhancing the reader's empathy and engagement.
Task Achievement
Clearly state the duration you have been living there and if there have been previous attempts to address these issues, adding depth to your concerns.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a range of linking words to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs, enhancing the overall readability of the letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Divide your letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific point: introduction, description of the problem, requested actions, and a polite conclusion, to increase clarity and effectiveness.
Task Achievement
Consider offering potential dates and times for the repairs, showcasing a proactive approach and making it easier for the landlord to act.